SHINTA SILVIA

ARGUMENTATIVE WRITING

TECHNOLOGY 

Title : Technology is like a double edged sword
Thesis Statement : Advantages and disadvantages of rapidly developing technology
Body Paragraph:
a. Advantages
b. Disadvantages
c. How to overcome technological addiction

Original Text

TECHNOLOGY IS LIKE A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD

According to Wikipedia Technology is the overall means to provide goods needed for the survival and comfort of human life. Technology at this time can be called a modern era, which is very easy to develop. There is a lot of creativity every day with a technology development, where this technology is needed by humans to help all jobs to be more skilled. With the digital era marked by developments in Information and Communication Technology continuing and developing so fast and increasingly sophisticated. Included in various aspects of life such as in the economic, political, cultural and defense and security fields.

From the rapid development of technology today we benefit from everyday life that is communicating easier and faster, facilitating access to information, shortening time and cutting costs, trading process is done online, online transactions, making the learning communication process more interesting, helping the process government communication, borderless communication, effective information sharing, opening up opportunities to work online, creating a variety of modern technological tools, creating a paperless environment, and a cleaner and safer environment.

  

The number of positive effects resulting from the growth of technology is also proportional to the negative things caused, such as the entry of foreign culture that is not easy to be accepted by children in Indonesia, excessive use of gadgets and ultimately can damage brain development in children, and lack of socializing, because the focus is always on technology and mutual help to help each other begin to disappear.

With the advantages and disadvantages of rapidly developing this technology, is how we can overcome the addiction to technology can try the following easy things to practice at home. First of all we have to do is start to prepare one day without cellphones and computers for 24 hours straight, Second, look for activities and activities outside activities that require internet connection, Third, discipline yourself by making a timetable for using technology every day, and finally , if you tend to be addicted to a smartphone or tablet device, it looks like you can try installing some applications that can help reduce addiction.

 

Finally, from some of the things that have been discussed above it can be concluded that technological development does indeed lead to positive and negative things. To be able to suppress the negative things that can affect ourselves is that we have to manage the progress of this information technology well. You as a good citizen must be wiser and observant in utilizing existing communication technology. Hopefully in the future there will always be solutions that can eradicate negative impacts that are likely to increase.

 

AFTER PARAPHARASING

Based on Wikipedia Technology is a whole means to provide goods needed for the survival and comfort of human life. Technology at this time can be called a modern era, which is very easy to develop. There is a lot of creativity every day with a technological development, where this technology is needed by humans to help all jobs to be more competent. With the digital era marked by advances in Information and Communication Technology continuing and developing so fast and increasingly sophisticated. Included in various aspects of life such as in the economic, political, cultural and defense and security fields.

From the current pace of technological development, we benefit from everyday life that communicates easier and faster, facilitates access to information, shortens time and cuts costs, trading processes are carried out online, online transactions, making learning communication processes more attractive, help the government communication process, communication without borders, effective information sharing, open opportunities to work online, create a variety of modern technological tools, create a paperless environment, and a cleaner and safer environment.

The amount of positive influence resulting from the growth of technology is also proportional to the negative things caused, such as the entry of foreign cultures that are not easy to be accepted by children in Indonesia, excessive use of devices and can ultimately damage the brain development in children, and the lack of socializing people, because the focus is always on technology and mutual help to help others begin to disappear.

With the advantages and disadvantages of rapidly developing this technology, is how we can overcome addiction to technology can try the following easy things to be applied at home. First of all we have to do is take steps to prepare one day without cellphones and computers for 24 hours straight, Secondly look for activities and activities outside activities that are related to the internet, Thirdly obedience by making a timetable for using technology every day, and finally if you tend to depend on a smartphone or tablet it seems like you can try installing some applications that can help reduce addiction.

In conclusion, from some of the things that have been discussed above it can be concluded that technological development does indeed lead to positive and negative things. To be able to suppress the negative things that can affect ourselves is that we must control the progress of this information technology well. we as good citizens must be wiser and more careful in utilizing existing communication technology. Hopefully in the future there will always be solutions that can destroy the negative impacts that are likely to increase.