FINA AMALIA (II)

Topic :Technology
1) Thesis statement : Way to use technology must be improved and need to learn about the use of good technology
2) Body 1                : The firts cause of technology abuse is oneself which brings a lot of of bad impact
    Body 2                : Bad effects that come to technology users who can not utilize properly
    Body 3                : Effective ways to overcome to technology and the misuse of self-initiated technology
3) Conclusion         : So, from the above statement it can be seen that technology has more impact on negative things because of the users themselves. With these points we can find out the causes, what are the impacts and also how to overcome them.
4) Title                    : “Can't use technology carefully? Just throw it!”

ORIGINAL TEXT 

“Can't use technology carefully? Just throw it!”

      In this sophisticated era, technology is no longer a strange thing to hear. maybe everyone is already using technology in any circle. starting from small children and even people who are old at once. This is certainly good news for them. but look what is happening now, technology is bringing more negative currents into society. Therefore it should be used in useful ways so that the technology is not negative. If not, the way to use technology must be improved and need to learn about the use of good technology

      First of all, the main cause of misuse of technology is oneself which brings many bad effects. Because humans are not good at sorting out what is good when using technology and also do not know the use of technology correctly. And actually if the technology is used properly, it will certainly benefit themselves in using technology for any field.

      Although technology users change the way technology is used properly, it will still have a bad effect for yourself because from the beginning did not use the technology properly. Examples of adverse effects that will be received by users of the wrong technology such as the many losses due to his own doing, reduce the ability to learn, reduce the ability to work, and also defamation for the user.

      In addition, effective ways to deal with the abuse of technology are like guidance from parents for technology users who are still children, tricks of using good technology from the environment, can sort out what is good. Maybe with some of these ways can reduce the possibility of the coming of actions that harm technology users

      So, the conclusion from the statement above it can be seen that technology has more impact on negative things because of its own users. With these points we can find out the cause, what the impact is and how to overcome it. moreover, think carefully when using poor technology, because the impact will come on yourself

      

AFTER PARAPHRASING

      In this stylish era, technology is no longer a weird thing to hear. Maybe everyone is already using technology in any round. Starting from small children and even people who are old at once. This is certainly good news for them. But look what is happening now, technology is taking more negative streams into people. Therefore it should be used in useful techniques so that the technology is not negative. If not, the way to use technology must be developed and need to study about the use of good technology

      First of all, the main cause of misapplication of technology is oneself which transports many bad things. Because people are not good at sorting out what is good when using technology and also don’t know the use of technology suitably. And really if the technology is used suitably, it will certainly benefit themselves in using technology for any arena.

      Although technology users change the way technology is used suitably, it will still have a bad things for yourself because from the opening did not use the technology suitably. Examples of adverse effects that will be established by users of the incorrect technology such as the many losses due to his own doing, decrease the capability to learn, decrease the capability to work, and also slander for the user.

      In addition, actual techniques to agreement with the misuse of technology are like assistance from parents for technology users who are still children, guiles of using good technology from the environment, can sort out what is good. Maybe with some of these techniques can decrease the likelihood of the coming of activities that harm technology users

      So, the conclusion from the statement above it can be gotten that technology has more effect on negative things because of its own users. With these facts we can find out the cause, what the impact is and how to overcome it. Moreover, think carefully when using lowly technology, because the effect will come on yourself